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Avatar Fic

  • Jul. 22nd, 2008 at 1:04 PM
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My first Avatar fic. Yay!

Title: Untitled, as of the moment
Fandom: Avatar
Characters: Sokka, Piandao
Rating: PG
Word Count: 398
Spoiler Warning: Mild spoilers for Sozin's Comet
Summary: After everything is said and done, Sokka has lost something important to him.

“Master,” Sokka said, bowing. “I lost my sword. I’m sorry.”

Piandao raised his eyebrow. “Your sword?” he asked.

Sokka nodded glumly. “I didn’t mean to,” he said. “I mean, Toph was falling, and I couldn’t just drop her, but… that sword is-- was-- a part of me, an extension of myself. It was the most precious thing you gave me, and I lost it. I’m sorry.”

He looked down.

“Sokka,” Piandao said, his rough voice kind. “That sword was not your most precious thing.”

Sokka looked up into his master’s eyes, a mute question within.

Piandao smiled. “Your friends are your more precious thing,” he said. “A sword does not matter - you can make another sword. Friends, however, are a different matter.”

Sokka smiled tentatively. Piandao grinned back.

“Where do you old guys get all of this sage wisdom?” Sokka cracked, his smile returning to his quirky grin. “I mean, Aang seems to have it too - did they just teach it a hundred years ago, and I missed out?”

Piandao chuckled lightly. “It’s something anybody can learn,” he said. “All it takes is patience and discipline.” He pressed something cool and smooth into Sokka’s palm. “Sokka - I took you as my student in the way of the sword, when even you had lost confidence in yourself, and you proved to me the man you truly are. Again, today, you have proved that worth. Now, it is my hope that you will allow me to take you as my student again, and my humble pleasure to confer upon you this honor.”

Sokka stared down at the flower-painted tile in his hand, awestruck.

“I ask you to become a member of the White Lotus Society,” Piandao said, words ringing with ritual and pride.

For a long moment, Sokka fought to speak, tears in his eyes. He composed himself, and bowed. “It would be my honor, master,” he said.

Piandao smiled and bowed.

Sokka looked at the pai sho tile in his hand. “Didn’t you already give me one of these?” he asked.

Piandao nodded.

“What was that about?” Sokka asked, skeptically. “Some pre-member initiation, or something?”

“It was just to see if you figured it out,” he said, smiling mischievously. “Now, let’s go see your friends.”

Scowling at being bested, Sokka followed.

“So does this mean I have to learn how to play Pai Sho?” he asked.

Comments

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[info]greedyslayer wrote:
Jul. 23rd, 2008 05:42 pm (UTC)
This was great, especially since I do want stuff with Sokka and Piandao post-finale (and I mourned the loss of the meteor sword).

And I like how Piandao teased the first Pai Sho tile thing--not really a pre-member initiation per se. ;)
[info]araine wrote:
Jul. 23rd, 2008 06:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. I mourned the loss of the meteor sword and the boomerang, but felt like it was an acceptable loss. That's why I wrote this, for the most part.
[info]jill_rg wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2008 02:44 am (UTC)
Truly FTW.
[info]araine wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2008 11:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
[info]reticent_lass wrote:
Aug. 24th, 2008 04:28 pm (UTC)
Excellent. Sokka's voice is perfect--that kind of babbling worried apology is tough to get down. And the last line was spot-on, considering he's from a handful of igloos at the bottom of nowhere, why should he know Pai Sho?
[info]araine wrote:
Aug. 25th, 2008 04:08 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm glad you think I captured Sokka's voice well! He's such a fun character to write.

I don't think he would know Pai Sho, but he'd be fairly good at is once he learns. What with being an innovative strategist and everything.
[info]plushulala wrote:
Aug. 29th, 2008 07:10 am (UTC)
I'm over a month late but, uh, I just stumbled upon this gem while I was doing a random search for "piandao". Nice work. :)
[info]araine wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2008 12:49 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it!

Piandao is win forever.
[info]plushulala wrote:
Oct. 6th, 2008 12:05 am (UTC)
Would it be possible for me to host this story on piandao.org? I went to message you about this but you're privacy options are set. ;_;
[info]araine wrote:
Oct. 6th, 2008 12:07 am (UTC)
Of course! I'd love that! Just credit it to me.
[info]plushulala wrote:
Oct. 6th, 2008 11:26 am (UTC)
http://piandao.org/fics/araine/untitled1.html <-- There's your fic. :) Is this the name you want to use on the site or do you want me to use a different author name? Also, I've placed a link back to your LiveJournal on the index page of fic links. Do you want me to direct your link somewhere else?
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